Two and a half years ago, I received a few sample chapters of an unsolicited manuscript that made me laugh out loud from the very first page, so I immediately wrote to the author and asked her to send me the whole thing. It was called The Encyclopedia of Me, and it was the brilliant story of twelve-year-old Tink Aaron-Martin. When Tink gets grounded, she decides to use the time to write an encyclopedia of her life, encompassing her family, with two loving parents and two older brothers, Lex and Seb (the latter of whom is autistic); her hairless cat, Hortense; her fickle best friend, Freddie Blue Anderson; and, as the summer unfolds, a new interest in skateboarding and an equal interest in the blue-haired skateboarding boy next door, Kai (whom the much more assertive Freddie Blue just might like as well). The manuscript at that time alternated portions of the encyclopedia with straight-narrative sections. I loved the format, but what I loved even more was the voice, which was capable of hilarious observations like this one:
Seb frequently smells as bad as Lex, but different. This is mostly because he staunchly refuses to shower more than three times in a week. If you are ever not sure which twin you are dealing with, breathe deeply. If your senses are kickboxed into an eye-watering stupor by the stinging stench of cheap cologne, it’s Lex. If they curl up and die due to the overwhelmingly hideous moldy pong of sweat, combined with the antiseptic, lemony zing of hand sanitizer, it’s Seb. Easy, see?
But Tink's voice was also capable of great sensitivity and thoughtfulness, in contemplating Freddie Blue's behavior or her favorite tree. All the characters felt as rich and flawed and warm and complicated as many real people I know. Tink is biracial, but it's simply a fact of who she is, not the source of any angst (beyond an inability to get her hair to behave). And Karen fully dramatized some great set-piece scenes, like the one where Freddie Blue, Tink, and Kai try to spend the night in a department store. A terrific voice, wonderful characters, the ability to execute some great scenes, genuine emotion, and that aforementioned laugh-out-loud humor all made me fall in love with the book, and I signed it up as soon as I could.
Over the next year and a half, Karen and I worked together to absorb the narrative sections into the encyclopedia entries and turn the entire book into an encyclopedia, with the plot unfolding alphabetically from A-Z. This involved (nobody who knows me will be shocked to hear) a lot of outlines at first, as Karen cataloged all her plot events and encyclopedia entries and mapped them onto each other; and then a lot of cutting and adding, tweaking and refining right up through the proofreading stages, as we juggled entries, photos, and footnotes in within our allotted 256 pages. But the book remained both intensely emotional and very funny -- a perfect tween-girl smart read, and equally great for fans of YA writers like E. Lockhart or Jaclyn Moriarty. Recently I asked Karen some questions about herself and the book.
First things first: What would your own encyclopedia entry look like?
Rivers,
Karen (June 12, 1970 - forever). (Karen prefers not to die.) Author of
many wonderful novels for children, teenagers, and adults. Born in
British Columbia, Canada, she went to college for ages and ages and
studied a little bit of almost anything, having contemplated at various
different times careers in theatre, journalism, law, and medicine. Then
she worked at the phone company and some equally scary places before
becoming a writer full-time. She has always loved giant sets of
encyclopedias because they contain all knowledge! (As well as for their
beautiful gold-edged pages, of course.) She has two splendid children
who never fight or spill things, and a dog who -- if properly inspired
by a squirrel -- can actually climb trees. (Only one of those
statements is not 100% true.) She can usually be found walking slowly
up or down the mountain behind her house, thinking things or taking
photographs, or -- on a good day -- both.
Which came first with The Encyclopedia of Me, the story or the format? How did the other one follow?
I
think the story came first, or rather, the character. At the time that
I started to write this book, I think my kids were just babies. My
older son, my stepson, is autistic. And at the time, his autism was
really consuming our lives. Most of our waking hours were spent dealing
with certain situations, supporting him, or talking about his autism
and how we were going to deal in the longer term. One of the things we
talked about was what it would be like for siblings to have an older
brother for whom different rules applied. That was basically the germ
of the idea of the story, simply that it would be the sibling's story
and the autism would merely be on the periphery and normalized because
that would be all the sibling would ever have known. It was so much in
my consciousness, in a way I think it was my way of trying-on-for-size
what that might be like.
When I began to write, Tink originally was going to read
the entire set of encyclopedias, inspired by A.J. Jacobs's The Know-It-All. As I wrote, it seemed implausible that she would get past the first As
(I started reading them again myself and was struggling by the third
entry), so she started to make up her own. It evolved from there. I
know people roll their eyes when author's say "It wrote itself!" But in
this case, the format decided itself and it was something of an
accident. Originally, it was straight narrative with the entries
scattered throughout, but then we decided to take a stab at making the
whole book fit the format. In addition to working well with the story
(I think!), it was also fun and challenging to write. Sometimes it
even felt impossible.
This is going to sound as crazy as the "It wrote
itself!" comment, but I will say that it's much more satisfying to write
a book that's really really hard to write, from a technical standpoint. It makes me understand, on a completely different level, why people
climb Everest for fun. Having successfully done it once, I have all
kinds of ideas for other novels structured like specifically formatted
books, such as cook books and etiquette books and ... the possibilities
are limitless!
What attracts you to encyclopedias?
The
idea that a book holds all the answers. Of course, now I'm grown up, I
understand that knowledge changes and evolves, and looking at old
encyclopedias, you realize they are full of things that we subsequently
now know more/differently/better. But as a child, they were flat-out
the answer to everything. I think Wikipedia is similarly attractive
now, but it isn't quite the same. You don't randomly flip through Wikipedia while lying on the hall carpet on an endlessly long summer
day, discovering things about Sri Lanka or the endocrine system that you
never knew. The magic of random discovery has pretty much been lost
with the loss of print encyclopedias, which makes me sad. I'm ashamed
to admit that I don't currently HAVE a set of encyclopedias, but I wish
that I did. I'm slightly hoarder-like and collector-inclined, I think I
would like to have sets from various different decades, just to play
compare-and-contrast with them (I have dictionaries and etiquette books
and medical books across decades, which are lots of fun). But I live
in the world's smallest house! So that might not work.
What sort of challenges did you face in working the story into an alphabetical, encyclopedic form?
There
was a very real risk that the plot was going to be compromised by
trying to force it into a mold. Making the story flow was incredibly
tricky (as you know!). The last thing we wanted was for anyone to read
the book and be conscious of the manipulation of the plot to fit the
alphabet, so we made a real effort to simply tell the story as a
straight narrative that incidentally was displayed in alphabetical
order.
Describe your favorite writing space and time.
I
love to write during the day because it's a novelty. For the last
seven years, most of my writing has been done at night on a laptop in
bed (for warmth), after the kids are asleep. I've seen more of 3 a.m.
than I'd like to have seen! Now my kids are in school full time and I
can sit (!) at the dining room table and write while actually properly
awake. It remains to be seen if this improves the quality of my work.
What novels were the biggest influence on you when you were a young reader? And what encyclopedia did you grow up using?
I
read so voraciously as a child and a young adult that isolating books
now to say they were more or less influential than any others feels like
I'd be contriving an answer to fit what I feel an author should say, as
opposed to the truth. The truth was I read everything, absolutely
everything that I had access to, in massive volumes. We did not watch
TV (or at least the TV we had had a blown picture tube, so we could only
watch about 30 minutes a day before the tube gave up, and it involved
using pliers and getting electrical shocks to turn it on). We read. I
read between seven and ten books per week for most of my childhood/teen
years.
When
I say we read everything, I really mean it. My mum was briefly in a
Danielle Steele phase, and I read those as eagerly as I read Little Women
or A Wrinkle in Time or Are You There, God? It's Me, Margaret. Or
Flowers in the Attic, for that matter. My dad read mostly books about
war and tall ships, so I have this absurdly detailed understanding of
tall ships based on reading the Horatio Hornblower series repeatedly.
There was never really a distinction made between "adult" books and
"kid" books in my family; nor was there any fuss made about genre
fiction vs. literary fiction. They belonged to Book Of The Month club,
which I don't think exists anymore, but involved getting condensed
versions of popular books in a bound volume every month. We loved
those. It's impossible not to be influenced by everything you read;
whether it's good or bad, there is something you can take away from it.
I suppose it's only a matter of time before I write a tear-jerking
romance that is set on a brigantine.
As
an adult looking back, I'd say if I wanted to be inspired by anyone's
career, I'd pick Judy Blume. She really perfected the whole "You are
going to be OK" genre of realist YA. Madeleine L'Engle I think
redefined the parameters of middle-grade fiction, blurring lines of
fantasy and reality, and I love her for that. I love everyone who tried
something new or different and just really went for it, both back then
and now.
You’ve
written a number of novels about this preteen/early teen stage of life,
and especially the family/friends/young romance conflicts that I think
are the bread-and-butter of older middle-grade. What attracts you to
writing about this time period? Was it a significant time in your own
life?
I
learned a while ago (after I was already writing YA) that a person's
frontal lobe doesn't fully develop until they are in their early
twenties. I'm paraphrasing (and possibly mis-remembering), so don't
quote me on this, but I believe the gist of it was that until the
frontal lobe finishes developing, people are actually biologically
unable to view the world in a not-entirely-egocentric way. The idea
that people (and characters) are limited by this brain development to
seeing the world in this utterly up-close way at all times is
fascinating to me. It explains why I can remember with 100% clarity,
things that happened to me, who I had a crush on, what I wore, and how I
felt when I was young, but I have only vague recall of what I said or
did or wore in the intervening decades. The intensity of that stage of
life is what draws me to it again and again. The first time you feel
something, it's so powerful. Kids are figuring out who they are, like a
Choose-Your-Own-Adventure, except more like a
Choose-Your-Own-Character. The possibilities are endless, which makes
teen and pre-teen characters so much fun (and so endlessly interesting)
to write.
As
a teen/pre-teen, I never felt quite comfortable in my own skin. Now,
when I talk to the kids who I perceived as problem-free and popular and
perfect, I find out that they struggled with similar feelings. Who
knew? It seems as though everyone always feels like they are slightly
on the outside, looking in. In a way, I want to send a missive to my
younger self that effectively says, "Look! Everyone else feels the same
way! You are going to be OK!" Except maybe now I can send the
bulletin to my readers: You ARE going to be OK. I promise.
Links:
Links:
- Karen's always lovely and thoughtful blog
- A terrific review from Little Willow: "Middle school librarians would be wise to add The Encyclopedia of Me by Karen Rivers to their shelves this fall."
- The Quill and Quire starred review: "E is for excellent."
Jaeger, Freddy (1916 - 1996) Adventurer, life-long Cubs fan, good friend, brother, and son. Forced to go out on his own at age ten, Freddy, ever resourceful, travelled the western United States meeting a pantheon of interesting characters, facing unbelievable dangers, on a quest to resolve a family problem and find his way home again.
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Edwards, Nancy (age unknown) Children's author, teacher, and former contestant on Who Wants to Be a Millionaire (where she won $32,000 but managed to misidentify the Great Lake she has lived beside her whole life) read her Children's Encyclopedia straight through from Abacus to Geyser as a child, then moved on to her family's (sadly) non-gilt edged World Book. Her writing has been influenced by the raising of two death-defying sons (see motorcycles, rock climbing, scuba diving, Brazilian martial arts) and her marriage to a man whose life goal is to create a 365-day calendar of awful puns.
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