tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4074861.post6317310475809328952..comments2024-03-28T02:36:55.037-04:00Comments on Brooklyn Arden: WhewCherylhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05972029478350879112noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4074861.post-9997416519216631992008-03-03T13:44:00.000-05:002008-03-03T13:44:00.000-05:00I didn't know this book was out! I LOVED Jim the ...I didn't know this book was out! I LOVED Jim the Boy (and have two signed copies: one to read and one to light worship candles in front of). I'm so glad to hear that the new one is as good as the first.<BR/><BR/>He's a very good reader of his work. If ever you get the chance to hear him, take it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4074861.post-61878181669944181432008-02-28T12:12:00.000-05:002008-02-28T12:12:00.000-05:00You give me hope, Cheryl. I took my 1st chapter t...You give me hope, Cheryl. I took my 1st chapter to our critique group. "It flows too well." "It's beautiful writing but this is a murder mystery." Can't there be beauty while you lead your MC down a forest path to discover a dead body? Then chop up your sentences to give the prose punch?<BR/><BR/>WandaVAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4074861.post-29728883458747175732008-02-28T11:56:00.000-05:002008-02-28T11:56:00.000-05:00I remember the scene from Northern Lights! I also ...I remember the scene from Northern Lights! I also remember the impact it made on me, you are right, if he hadn't written it the way he had-so smoothly and with such flow-I probably wouldn't have caught up with Lyra.<BR/><BR/><BR/>ps-"Falling Slowly" WON!Sharanyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10854112156033972511noreply@blogger.com